script by Rob Kraneveldt
Panel 1: The sun is setting rapidly. Our character starts to walk briskly, leaving a path of trampled flowers in his wake.
NARRATOR: The darkness is coming.
Panel 2: There are no more flowers here, only dense, thick jungle. He is practically running now. The sun is barely visible now and sits lower in the sky.
NARRATOR: He runs towards it. Maybe if he can catch it, he can keep the darkness away.
Panel 3: We are in very dim light. The tree canopy makes it even darker. He is lost now. He is standing trying to get his bearings, hands pressed against his temples in frustration. One of the larger trees near him is hollowed out.
NARRATOR: Lost. Confused. He does not know what to do.
Panel 4: He sees the large hollowed out tree and takes a closer look.
NARRATOR: His only instinct is to hide and maybe the blackness won’t find him.
Panel 5: He crawls into the hollow opening.
NARRATOR: It is not as quiet now. Strange calls and jungle noises echo in the darkness.
SOUND FX: CRAW…CRAW…
Panel 6: He is sitting up in a fetal position hugging his knees. He is barely visible now. His terrified eyes really stand out.
NARRATOR: He is terrified. He closes his eyes.
Panel 7: This panel is totally black.
THE MAN (THOUGHT): !
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script by AJ
Panel 1: As the man looks to the sky he sees something on fire falling to the ground while he is unsure of what it is he went to see what it was that had fallen.
Narrator: He has so many questions, but noway to get answers.
Panel 2: As the man goes over to it he see a hole in the ground from where it had landed, but he doesn’t pick it up he just looks at it.
Narrator: He is unsure of what this is, but he some how knows it’s safe.
Panel 3: We zoom out to see it’s a gold box with a diamond on the top, it also has these strange symbols on it that intrgied him even though their meanings were unknown.
Narrator: He knows nothing of himself, but some how knows this box.
Panel 4: As he picked up the box a blue lady walks up behind him, he backs away, but notices she has something around her neck that looks to open the box.
Narrator: He is unsure of the lady, but some how knows she won’t harm him.
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Well everyone very sorry for this delay have been very busy, this is the two contest entries and the chosen one is AJ script just because i think will add a lot of new dinamics to the comic, its going to add a new character and some new elements to the story, and because is only 4 panels long i can have a movie like aproach to the scene.
congrats AJ the page will be done in a couple of days for sure
